by X Harlea X Mar 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I am on my own, |
I like this poem and can relate to being alone |
Great job.just remeber that you are not on your own. |
It was an okay poem, bt I'm a rhyming fan, a usually don't even read non-rhyming pieces, but yours was short, so I did. Even though this piece was short, it had a lot of power and emotion, good work. |
by Baby Rainbow
Its short but its good, well done xx |
Well written but very sad sweet. 5/5 |