Huni, huni, huni! I adore this. I truly do - I'd honestly call it one of your best poems to date. :] Beautifully done.

"Slow down, you can't just let things end like that."
-- an amazing beginning; truly something that caught my eye and kept my attention.

"I need you."
-- such a simple line, yet to me it held so much beauty. when I read it, it sounded so vulnerable and sadly written. lovely.

"All I want is your arms and love but no,
You will not give them to me, you refuse,
I taste the tears now."
-- jesus, woman. are you trying to make me cry? lmao. very touching.

"My skin in thin and my knees are weak,
I need you to survive."
-- these lines were probably my favorite in the entire poem. they were so sweet yet heartbreaking at the same time. they portrayed vulnerability and love at the same time. amazing.

"This is the untold ending of a love that is gone,"
-- a very creative line. :] i'm lovin' it.

Darlin', this was absolutely-positively-beautiful. There's no other way to describe it. Definately one of my favorites. Phenominal job, m'dear. (: Overall: 5.5

-- Steph..