Awwww.....so cute! Just suggestions:

"cuz i know in your arms im save"
Save should be safe

This poem is so adorable, but I think you could make it flow a bit better. It doesn't matter that much, but it would just be a bit easier and more enjoyable to read. Good job, take care!

Awe, a very sweet and beautiful write. This piece was simple but portrays a lot. And you expressed yourself deeply and clearly. A heartfelt write, and an enjoyable read. 5/5.

Wow!!..great job!!.it had that really sweet emotion to it! ;)!
"You know my every thought,
you know me,
the real me,
and you love me just the way i am,"
^^^^ very nice..i wish i had that sertain person that will luv me for who i am..not for something i pretend to be..
"For this life you've given me,
how awsome, how wonderful it is,
you're my everything,
you're my everything,
And i give all to you, "
^^^ very nice too!....i like how u did the repetition with 'you're my verything'..it has a nice effect to it...and my favoritest line is the very last line!.......i'll stop babbling now!..but i really liked this poem!!!! -going in my favs.

5/5
***aLy***

Wow, thats wuz really good. but i guess we were thinking about 2 different thing. i thoughtu were talking about a guy or sumthing, cuz thats how i felt about my ex. but wut u said also made sense. it wuz really good :-D

Very good poem.
I believe in God myself.
Good job!
5/5

God is good.

lol nice write

-Syn

Beutiful poem... god is GREAT.... Great job 5/5

This poem was beautiful. and you wrote it very well. i really like it and you really captured the meaning. nice poem. i really liked reading it. (:

Nikki,congrats.5/5.
A beautiful write.This poem reflects your faith in the Almighty.Keep writing.

Not many people write about God anymore. It's good to read poems like this. Good job on this one.

Nice poem =)
well done good flow! keep it up

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Wow.......I really liked that. I really know this feeling so it does hit home really close to it actually. Great Work IT is definately going in my favorites

This is really good!

Very simple yet beautiful piece. Beautifully written and you express a lot of emotion.
My favorite part is:

"You know my every thought,
you know me,
the real me,
and you love me just the way I am".

Aww such a sweet poem to write
very realistic
5/5

This poem is simple beautifull it reall shows how much you believe in god
i love this poem alot you are a really amazing poet