This is really good. i can really relate to it. ive been there. im there now. its really scary you try and keep everything inside and not be vulnerable but you cant help it when someone comes along who you love. just a word of advice... dont scare him away. ahah but i loved this poem 5/5 :)

We all need that special someone to open the door that remains closed to others.
There is nothing wrong with how you wrote this:)

Good stuff, girl

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