Oh my gosh, this is so sweet! I love love love this and it flow perfectly and the words are so perfect, nice job! I loved this part:

"As the days go by,
It's getting even harder to breathe.
But I know I have to be strong,
Even when the pain keeps holding on."

Nicely stated, and so so cute, take care!

I feel the exact same way sometimes....loved it....great job!!

N d heart will always go on n on n on...

This poem brought back d memories of leonardo-di-capri0 n Kate Winslet... on d deck of d TITANIC between d icy oceans mersmerized in each other n d sound of..
Celeine diaz....

Forget the Titanic n back to ur poem... it is a fantastic write,...

just keep writing,

best wishz... karan...

Wow that poem is so sweet and so beautifully written. i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work so i can keep on reading