As I Think Of You

by Brittany C   Mar 30, 2008


I write this poem as I think of you.
Honey you are always on my mind.
I can't stop thinking about you.

Our future is as bright as the sun.
Our love is young and strong.
We can last forever I hope that we do.

You give my life meaning
that at one time seemed to be missing.
Until you came into my life sweetheart.

As I think about you I cant help but dream
of all the wonderful and exciting things
we plan to do together; forever.

I realize that I truly want to be yours.
You're my one and only true love.
You are key to my once cold heart.

I want to be your lover for life.
Your only true love
and the mother of your children.

As I am thinking of you
I end this poem about true love.
That will stand the test of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem was good and I felt that you really wanted to get your message across to everyone that this is the real deal.

    The above statement is also it's downfall. You were too close to the poem and I felt that it was really a hard type of poem to complete. The flow suffered in points.

    I want to be your lover for life;
    Your only true love,
    And the mother of your children.

    I want to be the love of your life
    The one, and only true love,
    and a mother to your children.

    Perhaps something like that. The middle line is really something hard to swallow. All In all I think you did a great job on the poem.

    I'm also going to add you to my favorites list.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poems feelings were great. The word usage was good too. The flow was a little off though... and it was ... too vague. Could stand to do more poetic phrases. But the feeling was there and that's great. So keep it up!

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