Very true expression - simple and natural. good work, keep it up and may you have many future peaceful rainy moments. Rain is a peaceful time. The old saying " into every life a little rain must fall" brings peace to some and pain to others.

Wow. i loved this piece very much. it's so true. the flow was great and the form was unique. i feel exactly the same when it rains. and for some reason i love poems about rain.
you did a great job writing this. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.