Amazing! you painted an image in the readers head with your words i loved it : )

"Drowning in her sea of sorrows,
To the mattress she lies chained"
great great wording and loved the image

"Her painted heart ripped to shreds."
seriously this would be a line people could start to quote !

"There's no escape from this beauty's hell.
Love pushed her over the edge,"
you portrayed something most people wouldn't! i loved it : )

5/5 <33