If Only I Could Explain

by Blue   Mar 31, 2008


I type.. I type
to rime and write,
I want this poem to mean allot.
I fight to write with all my might.
I hold back these tears as they get in my way,
my way of you, my way life.
I can't tell If you see my pain, as my pain is out.
I shout, I shout help me now,
I can't type no more these tears are too much..
I type, I type as nothing comes out.
I'm all out of tears now, as I sit and I type...
If only I could explain, the feeling I feel,
right now as I type...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Thank you, hay i read one or two of your poems, i got work early tomorrow, but when i get off i'll read more. Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Aww i'm so sorry. i know how that can go. yes you are getting somewhere with this, this is very good. i love it. i can really relate to it. if you ever need someone to talk to i'm here and if u want or can, can u read any of my poems?

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    I'm glad to see allot of ppl have read my poem! but can anyone tell me if i'm getting anywhere? good, fair, excellent , poor? I wrote this the night it hit me, that my girl wanted to be friends, not GF BF... and i didn't know how to explain how i felt! i wanted to be her friend so bad, but at the same time i didn't... Now we don't even talk.. Kinda miss her... Kinda a to little to late story. =/

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    I'm glad to see allot of ppl have read my poem! but can anyone tell me if i'm getting anywhere? good, fair, excellent , poor? I wrote this the night it hit me, that my girl wanted to be friends, not GF BF... and i didn't know how to explain how i felt! i wanted to be her friend so bad, but at the same time i didn't... Now we don't even talk.. Kinda miss her... Kinda a to little to late story. =/

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