I'm glad to see allot of ppl have read my poem! but can anyone tell me if i'm getting anywhere? good, fair, excellent , poor? I wrote this the night it hit me, that my girl wanted to be friends, not GF BF... and i didn't know how to explain how i felt! i wanted to be her friend so bad, but at the same time i didn't... Now we don't even talk.. Kinda miss her... Kinda a to little to late story. =/

I'm glad to see allot of ppl have read my poem! but can anyone tell me if i'm getting anywhere? good, fair, excellent , poor? I wrote this the night it hit me, that my girl wanted to be friends, not GF BF... and i didn't know how to explain how i felt! i wanted to be her friend so bad, but at the same time i didn't... Now we don't even talk.. Kinda miss her... Kinda a to little to late story. =/

Aww i'm so sorry. i know how that can go. yes you are getting somewhere with this, this is very good. i love it. i can really relate to it. if you ever need someone to talk to i'm here and if u want or can, can u read any of my poems?

Thank you, hay i read one or two of your poems, i got work early tomorrow, but when i get off i'll read more. Thanks