Comments : She Gave Me The Moon

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    A very sweet poem. I like that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    My little angel
    Gave from her heart
    A gift so precious
    With which I'll never part

    Aww Cindy, your poem made me cry. I so recognize the emotion behind these lines..
    I only have Emil, but I love him with all of my heart. Ever since he was able to stand on his feet he has picked daisies for me and still does! And ever since he was able to write I have found messages everwhere saying Mummy, I love you. I still find them on my pillow. Where would we be without the love of our children.....
    Thank you so much for sharing this sweet dedication, sweetheart. Please hug little Ashley for me. I will pray for her to get well.

    Love you,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    This was a moving story! The love within was painted so strongly. The most innocent of actions can express such meaningful emotions. I know this gift will remain within your heart forever. a joy to read as always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Tears filled my eyes
    She thought I was sad
    I had to explain
    She made me so glad
    ^^^
    Aww Cindy this part is so touching. To a child tears usually mean sadness but to us they can be the most beautiful thing in the world sometimes, when they fall from joy and happiness .... it's like our hearts burst with love and tears of joy stream.

    My little angel
    Gave from her heart
    A gift so precious
    With which I'll never part
    ^^^
    This ending stanza spells L-O-V-E in so many ways. A gift from the heart means more than anything and when it comes from a child it is more precious than anything in the world.

    A beautiful poem you've penned my friend. Your little Ashley is sure one special little girl ... and this piece shows exactly the true meaning of love and the power behind it.

    Truly a beautiful, heart warming read hun
    XXXX
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Aw that is so cute cindy, and this is a great poem, fav part is

    "My little angel
    Gave from her heart
    A gift so precious
    With which I'll never part"

    you are so gifted cindy keep up with these great poems!!!! i give this one a 5/5!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Unbelievably heartfelt and moving, it brought tears into my eyes. *cries silently*
    I admire your writing. So beautiful, and warm.

    5.5

    Take care,

    Sarah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    As always Cindy you have a way with the words you chose for your works. well done and may you find more thoughts to put on paper to show your poets heart.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    So sweet, this poem was wonderful and i truly love it, you are a star. talent bursting from every pore in your body.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I know i am the late one, sorry for that dear.

    Loved the poem and this is surely one thing which i will never forget, this brought tears in my eyes too. i am so proud of Ashley, Lindsey and ofcourse Jr Johnny.

    Love flows in blood.

    all the best and take care

  • This poem really shows love!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy this is so beautiful.....what a sweet and loving gift Ashley gave you! Children are so amazing in their innocence.....touching and inspitational...great job!