by StandStill Mar 31, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
A little angel |
by girlnextdoor
Beautiful work as always, "the world tore off the angel's wings"- amazing line, just wow |
There were good bits and bad bits to this. I think this piece was better at the beginning. The first stanza was great! It had good rhythm and rhymes. |
by CWG
WOW! That was an amazing poem. Really sad but truly amazing! definitely a 5. |