It's Hard to let Go

by Crystal   Mar 31, 2008


It's hard to let go of someone so close to you,

it leaves you feeling down and blue.

I don't wanna do this but i know its gotta be done,

It's obvious with me you had no fun.

So I'm saying goodbye and this is the end,

I know that maybe one day we can be friends.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krathia

    Not bad, the 2nd and 3rd lines were very simple but nice.

    "It's obvious with me you had no fun."
    ^ I would work a bit more on this.

    Short and simple, but it made me smile. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    I really like the idea behind your poem. I like what you have written, but maybe you could make a little longer...just my thoughts. The last line sounds like a great lead-off for another stanza. Great Job!

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