This is great, I really loved the first stanza, that just popped out at me the most. Nice work and thanks for commenting on my haiku. Take care! |
by Im not broken anymore
Nice!- Good job yet again.. I really love your work.. And if he dont like you cause you write poetry he dont deserve you.. He should be happy you found a way to cop with things and express your self... 5/5 |
by Inuhanyo
Very good ^_^ I liked it, sad yet sweet, makes me want to smile. |
by Ingrid
Hey Sarah, |
by The Queen
Very cute poem although filled wit sadness..Hope he'll notice you soon but juz be yourself and people will surely love you for who you are..Good Job.. |
by Tom Swart
A nice sweet love poem splilled from your poets pen and the emotions that greeted us are true I'm sure. may you find a willing pair of lips to whisper those three words again. |
Hey sarah, |
Nice one Sarah! no one could stop love if you really feel it and i am so happy that there are still brave people like you that would fight for what they really want. :) |