Red

by vaibhav shah   Mar 31, 2008


My eyes are Red, my cheeks are Red
From top to the bottom I am Red
My nerves are Red, my passions are Red
There is something that makes me Red

Red is the night, Red is the light
Wherever I see Red is the sight
Extreme is the height, Red is the kite
Hatred of my Red has turned into favorite

I feel you Red, I touch you Red
I hug you and kiss you oh my Red
Your every shade do make me glad
I love you so much my soul is Red.

31-3-2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Alot of red here i think we got blood and it is red ,rose is red, he i love the idea and i think you got clear mind to write in this way ,well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Ados

    Reds my favorite color so i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is beautiful! I really, really, like it. My favorite color too :P
    'Hatred of my Red has turned into favorite' this line breaks the flow, but other than that, this is one of the best flows in a poem that I've ever read...you're quite good...
    Congrats!

    (and I appreciate all your comments....but rate me! :P :P)

  • 16 years ago

    by Abha

    Your RED is of cupid and not of devil..
    your flash of red is stimulant , hot, and passionate..
    Red has given your poem speed, confidence and courage...
    your poem's soul is vibrant with red...
    Well done Mr. Red...good thinking...

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