This is nice poetry but very sad in real life, i like the part where you used the rhymes room and doom, thats nice and well thought of.. Generally nice work, keep it up..

Fourth stanza seems a little forced.. perhaps you should reword it.

A good piece, well, I liked it anyway. A familiar subject, yet it seemed rather fresh in a way, maybe because it didn't really have any ill feelings towards the abuser. I think the forth stanza was the weakest, but only because it was shorter than the others, which broke the flow of a piece a little.

Brad

So wonderful.
i grew up in an abusive home, and well, you nailed it right on.
my. favorite line was..."I got to school and everything is fine
Until they see the marks going up my spine
they say "oh my god what happened to you?"
I say "Nothing, there's nothing you can do."

Awww, good work xxx

Very sad hun. wish I could take it away:(

Wow...this is really amazing, the way its written feels pretty rapid...like there IS nothing to help...the details used are very good, hoping to read more soon.