No Ordinary Valentine's Day

by StuPiD FrEaK   Mar 31, 2008


Funny, I thought, when Valentine's Day approached
I arrived in my class to see my classmates smile
Receiving flowers and gifts from people who broach
Most were jealous to get nothing; almost made them cry

I expect nothing because I know no one cared
That was what I thought before he gave me those sweets
I just laughed but somewhere inside me, I got scared
I thought about the times he suffered from my mistreats

I asked him why bother to give me those
He just kept avoiding me
It made me think what he really wanted to show
What he plans, I must foresee

I never expect to end my Valentine's Day
Accepting a rose from such a stupid guy
Candies and roses and running away are weird ways
But at least I can say he tried..

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  • 16 years ago

    by mUsIc iS LyP

    NYAhhaHA!!! fUnnY hOW IT SeEmS...SoMEoNE WoULd EveN CArE...GiVinG suCh A CoMMenT..

    To A...pOEm LikE THiS.. She AcTuallY Made ThIS for ME.. am I RyT StUpId FreAk..Hihi

    How EmBArasSing....RemInIsciNG The PaSt...

    i CAn BArElY bReAtHe..*siGh* i Can'T IMAgINe What I HavE DoNE On THat DAy..*stUpiD* *stUpId*..HAhaiYZ... ~_^ wuI BacIn WroNg GRammaR KOw HUh..NYahahHA

    AmpIng KAnUNai...~xÖxÖ~ BleSsEd ChILd....

  • 16 years ago

    by mUsIc iS LyP

    NYAhhaHA!!! fUnnY hOW IT SeEmS...SoMEoNE WoULd EveN CArE...GiVinG suCh A CoMMenT..

    To A...pOEm LikE THiS.. She AcTuallY Made ThIS for ME.. am I RyT StUpId FreAk..Hihi

    How EmBArasSing....RemInIsciNG The PaSt...

    i CAn BArElY bReAtHe..*siGh* i Can'T IMAgINe What I HavE DoNE On THat DAy..*stUpiD* *stUpId*..HAhaiYZ... ~_^ wuI BacIn WroNg GRammaR KOw HUh..NYahahHA

    AmpIng KAnUNai...~xÖxÖ~ BleSsEd ChILd....

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This poem was a bit confusing for me. It said one thing and then quickly transitioned to another leaving me lost. I liked what you had to say but your thoughts were jumbled. I advise you to read over and organize your thoughts on this one because it has the potential to be a great poem. *4/5*

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