This poem was a bit confusing for me. It said one thing and then quickly transitioned to another leaving me lost. I liked what you had to say but your thoughts were jumbled. I advise you to read over and organize your thoughts on this one because it has the potential to be a great poem. *4/5*

NYAhhaHA!!! fUnnY hOW IT SeEmS...SoMEoNE WoULd EveN CArE...GiVinG suCh A CoMMenT..

To A...pOEm LikE THiS.. She AcTuallY Made ThIS for ME.. am I RyT StUpId FreAk..Hihi

How EmBArasSing....RemInIsciNG The PaSt...

i CAn BArElY bReAtHe..*siGh* i Can'T IMAgINe What I HavE DoNE On THat DAy..*stUpiD* *stUpId*..HAhaiYZ... ~_^ wuI BacIn WroNg GRammaR KOw HUh..NYahahHA

AmpIng KAnUNai...~xÖxÖ~ BleSsEd ChILd....

NYAhhaHA!!! fUnnY hOW IT SeEmS...SoMEoNE WoULd EveN CArE...GiVinG suCh A CoMMenT..

To A...pOEm LikE THiS.. She AcTuallY Made ThIS for ME.. am I RyT StUpId FreAk..Hihi

How EmBArasSing....RemInIsciNG The PaSt...

i CAn BArElY bReAtHe..*siGh* i Can'T IMAgINe What I HavE DoNE On THat DAy..*stUpiD* *stUpId*..HAhaiYZ... ~_^ wuI BacIn WroNg GRammaR KOw HUh..NYahahHA

AmpIng KAnUNai...~xÖxÖ~ BleSsEd ChILd....