by Timothy
Not bad, but I must say, not your best. |
This was really great. The beginning kept me curious and the ending was really creative. Nicely done! |
Very nice |
by Natalie
This is a great little poem! Personifying the sea was a really effective idea. I particularly love the fact that you go daily to check her moods. Lovely! 5/5 from me! |
I love you. |
Well penned Ingrid, and the surprise at the end. |
by mossgirl19
You're in love with the sea. Same here. Nice write! |