Crimson Shower

by Grimm   Mar 31, 2008


A crimson shower is a sight to behold,

you never could know how much it can flow,

but if it runs dry, would anyone cry?

or would they live on as this young man dies?

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It blows kno but its my first, and i hope to improve

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  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    5/5 I liked the flow ;) & thnks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Nice..great job!!1 i loved it..it was really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great job xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    It is really wonderful for your first.
    fix "sigh t" lol.
    other then that very powerful for such a short poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    This was a really good one for your first poem and if you keep writing you'll see how much you will improve.....Good poem
    5/5
    Nice Job!!!

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