Bittersweet

by Fear2love   Mar 31, 2008


Your sweet kisses cut me deep
when I feel down, you always put me to sleep
your sexy sharp blades
leave me feeling relaxed all day
your so understanding, you got what I need
sometimes you go too far, which cause me to bleed
I hate when you leave scars
even though you cause me some trouble
you always there when I fall
touching you always lead to puddles
feels good when we cuddle
your my only friend
your my sweet, sexy, sharp, friendly razor, until the end..

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    O love the rhyming scheme, so much power and force in the emotion you expressed here, the pain and agony written from the heart, OUTSTANDING POEM!!!! Two thumbs up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nil

    Excellent 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, wow, amazing, just...wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww its good xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very well poem. Some how It was striking. I didn't expect it to end like that. At the beginning for some reason I thought you were talking about a girl. (Maybe I wasn't concentrating on the poem (Sorry) Then when I finished till the end, It shocked me.

    ~your my sweet, sexy, sharp, friendly razor, until the end..~ It gave me the chills *Hides in the closet*

    Great poem. IT's really good.

    5.5 -_-

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