Comments : Bittersweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very well poem. Some how It was striking. I didn't expect it to end like that. At the beginning for some reason I thought you were talking about a girl. (Maybe I wasn't concentrating on the poem (Sorry) Then when I finished till the end, It shocked me.

    ~your my sweet, sexy, sharp, friendly razor, until the end..~ It gave me the chills *Hides in the closet*

    Great poem. IT's really good.

    5.5 -_-

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww its good xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, wow, amazing, just...wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Nil

    Excellent 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    O love the rhyming scheme, so much power and force in the emotion you expressed here, the pain and agony written from the heart, OUTSTANDING POEM!!!! Two thumbs up!