by Sarah
Very well poem. Some how It was striking. I didn't expect it to end like that. At the beginning for some reason I thought you were talking about a girl. (Maybe I wasn't concentrating on the poem (Sorry) Then when I finished till the end, It shocked me. |
by Baby Rainbow
Aww its good xxx |
by she
Wow, wow, amazing, just...wow |
by Nil
Excellent 5/5 |
O love the rhyming scheme, so much power and force in the emotion you expressed here, the pain and agony written from the heart, OUTSTANDING POEM!!!! Two thumbs up! |