Be With You

by Justin   Mar 31, 2008


I try to catch your attension
but it always seem to fail
Do you ever notice me
i can never tell

I try so hard to be with you
The way i felt was not a lie
Everything i said it was all true
I hoped you only put my heart on standby

I only wanna be with you
your the girl of my dreams
I wanna call you my boo
and make your eyes gleam

So tell me what it is
that i have to do
do i have to take your hearts quiz
cause im sure id ace that to

So many words that
got left unspoken
i wanna be the one that
dont leave your heart broken

Just give me a chance
Ill do whatever you want
just to see you look and glance
is as good as a sauage croissant

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  • 16 years ago

    by Britt

    Omg!!! this is so good... its rly cute... and i like all ur poems i just like this one alot...lol
    keep it up

    xoxox
    Britt

  • 16 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    DATz CRAZy!
    iTz LyK yUR WRiTiNG EBERyTHiNG MA BOyFRiENd WAS FEELiNG B4 WE GOT TEWGETHER.
    ii REALLy LyKEd DiZ ONE ALOT!
    dA ONLy THiNG ii WOULd CHANGE iS AT dA BEGiNNiNG yU SPELLEd ATTENTiON WRONG.
    BUT ONCE AGAiN 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Uh-wow.I never read a love poem that ended with a reference to a food-lol-but it was a good poem.I saw some simple mistakes like writting 'to' instead of 'too'.Plus, you should always capitalize your 'I' and add apostrophizes.

    "So many words that
    got left unspoken
    i wanna be the one that
    dont leave your heart broken"

    -here I think that you should change 'dont' to 'won't'

    great poem though.

    ---amber---

  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    I give it a 5/5!! Loved it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by BreathesToBleed

    This is really sweet.
    nice poem ... how long have you been writting

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