by JAZMIN Mar 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It took 24hrs to change it all. |
by KemistryKia
Loved it |
*speechless* |
by JAZMIN
I know...doesnt it suck... |
Wow, this is definitely make sense and you tok all the words in me to feel like "damn, that is what ive been trying to say some simple things" 24hours are just like that and really perfect for this!!! keep it up! |
by Mr. Darcy
I like this poem alot. The way you have used '24hrs' to really hit home the absolute shock of a loved one leaving!! |