by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Mar 31, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The rhyming scheme of this poem is ABAB and the coupled lines each have the same amount of syllables meaning each stanza's following A will be the same amount of syllables as the previous A and this is the same for B. Note that the number of syllables in each stanza is not set. |
Wow, I was so captivated by this poem, it was the title that really drew me in, Well done on a great write!! |
by Sarah
Amazing & captivating... Well written & beautifully penned 5/5 |
BREATHE, BREATHE PLEASE DONT GO ! |
by Mike Wilburn
The ABAB style is very interesting and adds a complicated variation by the syllables beat. I found that reading both A lines together then both B lines together added another dimension or way to read this poem which was very satisfying. 5/5 |
by Blissful
I loved how this piece told a story and it was quite easy to follow along with. The dark and haunting images compelled me to read more and I was left blown away. The flow was just flawless which made it easier for me to read and enjoy. It was filled with power and strong emotion making for a flawless piece. Thank you for entering the contest. Well done with this titile *5/5* |