Hi again, I gave you a 5 on this poem because it was very beautiful. Nothing like the true meaning of poetry. Excellent way of describing the words and things you wanted you to see through your eyes. great picture I got in my head while reading this poem. It kept my attention, It kept my focused so great job and a well done ^_^

I though it was good....... but this poem could have been better without the rhyming..... you could change it... but thats my opinion

Not bad

Loved it. It was like cute at first then it ws more symbolistic....=]

Good. =] I love it. I will def look at more of
your poems =]

4/5

It is really true that when want to express our suppressed feelings and other emotions.Poetry helps us a lot.You have defined poetry very well.Good job.4/5