Lonely heart

by Anonymous Angel   Mar 31, 2008


Lonely heart

I'm crying my eyes out,
as my heart longs for someone
Knowing there isn't going to be anyone,
makes my tears fall harder

As the day turned into the night,
loneliness starts creeping up
A million thoughts in my head,
yet no one to share them with

Drenched with misery,
as no one seems to care
Not even my ''so called'' friends,
attempted to be here

So why bother living,
when my heart already gave up.

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  • 16 years ago

    by heartless

    Your poem is everything i feel and more.
    it is great and full of emotions.
    it is whateveryone needs at some point

  • 16 years ago

    by DoRk

    Great poem loved it. But just bcz you can't find sumone doesn't mean you nvr will.

  • 16 years ago

    by DoRk

    Great poem loved it. But just bcz you can't find sumone doesn't mean you nvr will.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I liked the way you've written it...simple yet flowing with intense emotions..Got your feelings and thoughts across with the apt use of words..

    Straight to the point and too well chosen means of coveying what a Lonely heart feels

    A million thoughts in my head,
    yet no one to share them with
    ^^These lines are my fave...I so can relate to it though i can relae to the whole of the poem very easily...these lines are very close to my heart..there was a time when i felt myself in this situation..thanks to husband for proving that I was wrong i believing so..

    I hope this heart is not what you feel inside you...If so please move on..stay strong..You'll certainly find some one who would wipe out these thoughts from you

    Anyways,Keep up the good work
    5/5 from me

    Pooja

  • 16 years ago

    by minh

    Awe... i hope you don't feel this way, if you do hang on:] very great poem!

    take care :] keep it up! <3

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