Spectacular job! 5/5 for such great talent. Your very good at your poems, don't forget that. Keep up the great work.

I truly love this poem peopel can relate to the message good job

Ashleigh<3

Wow, great work xx

I love this poem!! the end is incredible... and the thing about friends...so real.. I think your poem is something that all people have been through at least once in their lives!

Great poem

This is good poetry, very sad but love the way you potray your emotion. I liked this part alot, " drenched with mysery, as no one seems to care, not even my so called friends ", this is well thought of and potrays alot.. Good work, keep it up

Awe... i hope you don't feel this way, if you do hang on:] very great poem!

take care :] keep it up! <3

I liked the way you've written it...simple yet flowing with intense emotions..Got your feelings and thoughts across with the apt use of words..

Straight to the point and too well chosen means of coveying what a Lonely heart feels

A million thoughts in my head,
yet no one to share them with
^^These lines are my fave...I so can relate to it though i can relae to the whole of the poem very easily...these lines are very close to my heart..there was a time when i felt myself in this situation..thanks to husband for proving that I was wrong i believing so..

I hope this heart is not what you feel inside you...If so please move on..stay strong..You'll certainly find some one who would wipe out these thoughts from you

Anyways,Keep up the good work
5/5 from me

Pooja

Great poem loved it. But just bcz you can't find sumone doesn't mean you nvr will.

Great poem loved it. But just bcz you can't find sumone doesn't mean you nvr will.

Your poem is everything i feel and more.
it is great and full of emotions.
it is whateveryone needs at some point