Taylor, Kayla, Rys

A little life saver
so sad and hard
for her, yes! i would!
i'd go that extra yard!!

i wish she would smile,
i really do
she doesn't see her wonderfulness
but she has a clouded view.

[ I could easily tell who this was. You used words that all of us could tell exactly who we were just by reading the first line. Amazing, I loved how you did that. You really showed how strongly you care about Tay here.]

a guardian angel
who crunches on ice
one of my best girlies
even if she doesn't always play nice

i'm getting to know her
and see how great
i can already tell this is a friend i'll keep
a friendship never to break

[ You could tell immediately that this was Ryssie with the whole "Guardian angel" line. With is true. Rys is all of our Guardian angels and has always been there for us. And I know she always will be. I actually laughed when I read this. So cute! ]

so in love
and so easily hurt
i'll hold my lovey high
keep her pure from dirt

i'll ruin her mind
just a little bit
but she's not as innocent as she seems
still, only huggles, never a hit

[ Omg, you hit the head on the nail PERFECTLY with me. I read the love part and immediately knew it was me. Muahahaha! But seriously. Everything you wrote was true and I couldn't stop smiling. It was so sweet and I truly did love it. You're such a doll.. mwah hunni. <33333 ]

You're probably wondering
for whom could i write?
three amazing friends i have
never gonna be free from my sight

sorry my poems are a little lame
and i'm sorry they're not that good
but i love you oodles and noodles
you make me smile, keep me in a good mood!

[ ROFL!! Make me laugh even more, woman! Omg, it was a perfect, adorable little ending probably only us four could get. I could just picture you saying this while giggling and being yourself ^.^ I love you so much. ]

Anyways... it was amazing all around, Gabby. You write amazing poetry and this was a wonderful piece, don't ever think otherwise about your work. Especially whenever it's about someone close. Let alone THREE people close to you. Love ya, as I've said million times before (though I have to tell you again). Thank you so much for being here for me and writing this. It was truly a wonderful poem. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~