i love this poem it touched my heart and i hope u keep up the good work

I absolutely loved your poem. I myself am only 15 and I have only submitted 1 poem. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

love it especially the last stanza x

this was done very well but some words wer abit out of point but read ok. Still a very good one I got a poem called Countess Of Blood and another called howling desert tell me what you think will you

well, not your best work but it's still good. Still heart felt. And I'm sure this is an older one so I'm know u've gotten much better.

†Dani†

I think it was a very good poem. I especially liked this part "I've had to watch my friends and family die / I've see eternal darkness grow in the sky" I know how it is:(
Keep writing and stay strong *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Very beautiful poem! One thing though:
"Why did I fall into this hell?
I made it to heaven, but then I feel"
I think you meant "fell" right? *wonders* except for that, it was a real pleasure to read. Keep up the writing! 5/5

I think this one is really great. It's so deep and meaningful. I can really relate to it too.

That was an awesome poem!
Very emotional and I really liked the storyline! Is it about a vampire? =)
5/5

I loved reading this poem. The verses just flowed together, and created a very well-done poem. THank-you. I hope to read more of your work!

It was Pretty Good 4/5

Wow that is amazing!

This is really good! =] 5/5

I realy loved your poem. such a sad feelings. and the pain behind the words. excellent image. gr8 wrk 5/5

I really loved this poem and this is the first time i have read your poem and i can say that i will be reading more, this is beautiful..very heartfelt and touching but i hope that is not what you feel and is going though, i can't help but take every poem serious..
wish you all the best
keep the great work up...

Hey the flow and structure is done very good, and I love all the description. Your an amazing poet and I really enjoyed this piece.
xx Another Crystal Tear Falls xx

I LOVE THIS POEM! not many people can pull off AABB Format but you did it so beatuifully! i have a few similar poems as well.

Ur poem was good over all...i liked it..... emotional..

This was a very good poem over all, it struggled at some points with the flow, but all in all it was fantastic. Very emotional!! :):)
Great jub, keep it up!!

Your friend:)
Alissa

Ur a good writer and it shows that ur a deep thinker as well. this is one the best poems i've read in a while.