I know the feeling my favorite uncle just died tuesday and hes not my first loss my mom died and my cousin and my great grandpa so i completly understand what yo0u are going through

It reminds me alot of my life i love it good job

Nothing is lost.....

poem is a poem....technically maybe not perfect.....but who is?

Heart written.......
vote 5

you asked....

When you say it,you do feel it..so..how does it feel like?

Hi! its good, yeah! a poetess like us is always rare! keep this cool! and keep on making one!..tnx! and more power.

I LOVE your poem! It's very emotional and I really get what your trying to say! Post more!

~Kim

This is a great poem. 5.5 p.s. not many people can understand the far of immortality, but it terrifys me too.

Living while everyone around you dies, is also one of my fears. I think you poem is quite good, and it has alot of depth as well.

It is a really good poem.
Just one thing
"I made it to heaven, but then I feel" Isn't "feel" supposed to be "fell"? Rhymes with "hell".

Josie

I found your emotion within this piece comes across as an honest outpouring, at no time did I feel you were just filling in the lines, the emotional content was powerfully portrayed, The only critique I have is the flow, it was hampered at times. BUT, as I'm a lover of emotion within poetry, I allowed for this flaw....beautiful work...Luv Lance:)

I really like this poem. Nice work on it! =]

Now As the many nights go by
The more I cry, knowing I can never die
When the end comes I will be forever alone
As I watch the world turn to stone

i just cant get over this part of your poem because it seems as though this is the way i feel anyways... but good job on this one i can really relate to it

Now As the many nights go by
The more I cry, knowing I can never die
When the end comes I will be forever alone
As I watch the world turn to stone

i just cant get over this part of your poem because it seems as though this is the way i feel anyways... but good job on this one i can really relate to it

Overall it was a great poem with good flow and lots of emotion!

Keep it up :) :)

MemberOfTheBlackParade x

I love this poems. the flow is great and in most long poems i kind of get lost, but this one kept my attintion. Keep it up. it great. :-)