by steven cairns Mar 31, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As hearts open the rising of the sun dawns a new day and as the glow of the sun shimmers accross the sea is as the glow my heart feelsevery time i see you my love the suns warmth is as when you are in my arms my body boils as to always to keep you warm to my heart. and as the sun will never fade or darken my love it will never fade but lighten with each days dawn always yours baby.. |
Thank you for your comments its truly amazing to hea that my writing is not wasted again i say thankyou |
by Sarah
Your style in writing is amazing, it's filled with emotions & honesty...Great job! Keep it up 5/5 |
I like the emotion you put into this poem. I can sense the love you feel towards whomever you wrote this about. Truly amazing. |