Comments : Looks Aren't Everything

  • 16 years ago

    by BreathesToBleed

    Omg you are so cute with your rightin

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    In the last stanza I think you should have it end with "more" and the second line be " adore".

    Other than that you've got a wonderful, amazing poem. I absolutely loved it. Such great meaning and beauty to it.

    Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    Greta poem!! Soo truee... And xactly how it should be.. :)

    'It's not just her personality
    that makes you want her more
    but her own individuality
    that makes you want to adore'
    -- The best one indeed! 8)

    5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like how ac rhyme and how ad rhyme I just love it's too adorable plus it made me smile lol I like how you describe her but I'm sure it's about a person or for me it's a pretty rabbit I don't know what's wrong with me I think it's the fact I'm leaving PQ and I'm just thinking weirdly anyways I just adorded this poem it's too cute for words I can't even describe how adorable this is I'm sure this is by far the cuttest love poem I've ever read (and I just don't like romance poems unless they are sad) so thank you for making an adorable poem take care! 5/5

    -Mori