Omg you are so cute with your rightin |
by Teria
In the last stanza I think you should have it end with "more" and the second line be " adore". |
by Annaam
Greta poem!! Soo truee... And xactly how it should be.. :) |
I like how ac rhyme and how ad rhyme I just love it's too adorable plus it made me smile lol I like how you describe her but I'm sure it's about a person or for me it's a pretty rabbit I don't know what's wrong with me I think it's the fact I'm leaving PQ and I'm just thinking weirdly anyways I just adorded this poem it's too cute for words I can't even describe how adorable this is I'm sure this is by far the cuttest love poem I've ever read (and I just don't like romance poems unless they are sad) so thank you for making an adorable poem take care! 5/5 |