He's Perfect

by Perfectly Broken   Apr 1, 2008


My heart beats so intently in his presence
And my soul jumps at his smile
His eyes hypnotize my thoughts
And I've fallen for him completely

His singing melts me, inside out
And his guitar playing is to die for
His words break through my walls
But he's so out of my league

His personality draws me in
And being near him makes me smile
He makes me heart skip beats
And he's got no flaws; he's perfect

this is my first free verse write. how is it?

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its great, i love it and how you describe your feeling and what happen to your heart ,and his eyes ,guitar,i love this alot and its flow nice as well ,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    It was very good xx well done xxx