Comments : Last moments

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is good, well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I love this poem. the flow is great and i the emotion is flowing out of this piece. it is very strong and real and raw and in you face (in a good way).

    keep up the good work and thank you for gracing me with your work and thanks for reading my work.

    <3 Sweet Escape