Hey, I enjoyed reading this. I guessed from the way you wrote this it's more lyrical? Meaning to write a song more than a poem? It's just a guess.. I could very well be wrong. I loved the way you described every detail and formed perfect imagery.

Greta xx

After I read this poem.. something came to my mind.. it shocks me to know there're persons who can write like this

Wow this was amazing! it was so beautiful. so heartfelt. i've never read anything like it. your an amazing writer. keep up the beautiful work! 5/5.

-Ashlei.