A very good range of vocabulary that ties the piece together so well. It kept me interested the entire time. Awesome job.

I really liked this poem. The word usage was very good and the flow was decent. Also, the begging creating the ending was very effective. Great write! 5/5

First of all I think that you did fantastic job with this piece and title matches text of the poem perfectly and you didn't mentioned at all in piece which is excellent.

-Nocturnal whispers reveal secrets
plunged in liquor of moonlit alchemy;
startling sensations lacerate sighs
of branches colored like diamond dew.-

^First line is simply superb. I absolutely love start of this poem and first two lines truly took my breath away. Great way to start this piece, very remarkable and captivating choice of words and you already built the foundation for rhythm of this one. I also enjoyed in description which you painted in rest of this stanza, but I just personally, can't see connection between first and second two lines.

-Angels sneak through icebound towers,
succumbing to artificial obscurity
sprinkled over forlorn, ragged senses
reborn within blossoming thunderstorms.-

^Wow! Impressionable lines, first line truly captured every piece of my attention and you embed whole picture in my mind. Totally unique choice of expressions and this refreshing images impressed me a lot.

-Legacy of enchantment embed into sights
smeared across the rubies of ardent pupils,
metaphorically bloodthirsty, craving
for hesitating hands to heal the thoughts.-

^Powerful! Every line is pure brilliance, I had to reread this stanza cause it is absolutely breath-taking and every line impressed me so much that I just had to read it again. Wow!

-Sinful ebony caresses intricate fantasies
framing fragrance of glassy flowers,
tempting ghoulish pleasures within
created to crawl through wax fields.-

^I think that you used simply perfect adjectives here, everything fits and whole stanza is, I don't know, simply something with such deep beauty and authentic thoughts.

-Frigidity entwines with arcane desires
crucified inside of silent crusades;
plunged in liquor of moonlit alchemy
nocturnal whispers reveal secrets. -

I admire this stanza too, I think that you ended this poem on extremely fascinating way, cause whole piece is simply secrets between nocturnal whispers(at least I think that) and you showed that greatly.
Overall you amazed me! I honestly admire your style of writing and I would gladly read this few more times, and I will, stunning piece!

The imagery in this piece just utterly blew me away my dear! I always find myself mystefied by your amazing use of vocabulary. This piece contained images and words others would be scared of using in their poetry but you penned this piece so flawlessly and it alll flowed naturally. Your title captured my attention as always and the messages behind you words were just wonderfully sweet to read. Beautifully written piece you have here. Well done *5/5*

Nice work you have wonderful talent!

First off.. Let me apologize for it taking me so long. lol.. I had soo much to do. But HEY i'm doing it now :P

now the poem..

Your vocabulary simply BLEW ME AWAY. The title was interesting and caught my attention before I actually got into the poem, and once i did .. it was really good. I am a big fan of rhyming... but you pulled it off great without. I'm almost on the brink of: it has to rhyme to be a poem (even though I have a couple un-rhymers) Thats how much I love rhyming. But the way you set everything up, the whole image behind it, made it turn out as a great piece. This is my favorite part:

Legacy of enchantment embed into sights
smeared across the rubies of ardent pupils,
metaphorically bloodthirsty, craving
for hesitating hands to heal the thoughts.

Excellent Job
5,5

Brilliant usage of words. I enjoyed every part of this poem. Your imagination is just indescribable. The way you put together words is amazingly creative. I can just be lost in the way you express your emotions here. You never fail to amaze me with your talent.

Frigidity entwines with arcane desires
crucified inside of silent crusades;
plunged in liquor of moonlit alchemy
nocturnal whispers reveal secrets.

Beautiful. (:

The title in this was great and once again I love you wide use of vocabulary. I still find that I am in awe at your talent for being so descriptive.

Each verse draws the reader in even deeper than the one before. It allows their imagination to take over as though they can see what is actually taking place as the words unfold.

Just amazing

~~Sher

You have a way with words, that I give you. This poem, to a limit, reminded me of 7th grade when we'd read those poems the teacher printed offline, and try to understand them - and usually wouldn't get them. Which is not a bad thing, at all. It leaves the mind able to wander and work the poem out by itself. Even if you're going for a direct meaning, you don't always get it. But, I think you did wonderful with this poem. I understood it, but at the same time I didn't. Which is what I like about poems - I can kind of get my own meaning to them. Kind of like life? Lol.

Great job, darling.
5/5