Simply Wrong

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You are an amazing writer :) It's to straight to the point, and I just can't faulter it! It's quite sad though, but the way you have written it, it portrays anger as well. But yet, it's beautiful :)

Very vivid, and thugh it has a more depressing subject youmade it seem a but more lighthearted, at least to me anyway.
5/5 :) Keep up the amazing work!

Yes yes yes very nice poem,and unfortunately i can relate it to myself :( but i loved this poem

Wow. i loved the way this poem flowed, it makes the emotions seemed more mixed. gives the poem more of a confused feeling.. great great job!!

Also, Very good.

I really enjoy the flow of this poem, it is very clear where pauses should be.

5/5

-Syn