Honestly, this is very good. I love the style. I really liked this poem a lot. Well done Natalie!

Awesome work xx

I dont know...I may like it I may not. I mean i can understand it, but it doesnt really have a poetic quality to me. I mean like it doesnt exactly have any poetic techniques. Hmm. It leaves me not knowing what to say. I just dont know...

(maybe thats what you wanted?)

Great poem.. The emotion in this poem was strong... Also meaningful.. As meaningful as the other one i've read just now... You're a good writer..
Well done..
Keep up the good work..

Dang, this is so sad!
He probably lost someone good.
It's a very good poem.
Good job!
5/5

Also, Very good.

I really enjoy the flow of this poem, it is very clear where pauses should be.

5/5

-Syn

Wow. i loved the way this poem flowed, it makes the emotions seemed more mixed. gives the poem more of a confused feeling.. great great job!!

Yes yes yes very nice poem,and unfortunately i can relate it to myself :( but i loved this poem

Very vivid, and thugh it has a more depressing subject youmade it seem a but more lighthearted, at least to me anyway.
5/5 :) Keep up the amazing work!

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You are an amazing writer :) It's to straight to the point, and I just can't faulter it! It's quite sad though, but the way you have written it, it portrays anger as well. But yet, it's beautiful :)