Its that suicide confession...

by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion   Apr 1, 2008


Maybe if you listened
to what i had to say
I'd still be here
to see another day

could you not be bothered
just to take the time
you didn't realize
that I'd do the crime

was it to much hard work
to wipe away my tears
or tell me not to worry
you scare away my fears

was it to much to ask
for you just to talk to me
even on the phone
that way you wouldn't see

are you thinking about it now
What you could have done
to ave saved my life
how far would you run

if you bothered to give a sh*t
maybe you could have saved me
but now my suicide confession
is all that you will see

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  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    This poem brought me to tears!! it was beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    This poem brought me to tears!! it was beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This is very nice, flowed wonderfully 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very hearfelt write...very sad...
    well expressed... your emotions.. your feelings.. everyhing could be felt...

    One suggestion- Try experimenting with some better words... that would add more impact to your poem...

    one typo in this line
    "to ave saved my life"

    please check..

    otherwise..its a well written poem...
    nice read..

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria Daniel

    Dang... I can relate to this in many ways and I can tell you so many things to help you change your feelings about suicide but nothing will help unless you want to help yourself. Listen to someone who has been through it all... I am 17 years old and I am getting thrown around home to home placement to placement, people abusing me, not even caring if I die or not. I overdoced many of times and NOONE came to my rescue. I realized that you should live your life for you not anyone else. Enjoy life! Ignore what others say about you, if they are talking about you THAT much obviously you must be very important!

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