Another powerful piece, i liek it xxx

Wow very powerful, i can relate 5/5

Dang... I can relate to this in many ways and I can tell you so many things to help you change your feelings about suicide but nothing will help unless you want to help yourself. Listen to someone who has been through it all... I am 17 years old and I am getting thrown around home to home placement to placement, people abusing me, not even caring if I die or not. I overdoced many of times and NOONE came to my rescue. I realized that you should live your life for you not anyone else. Enjoy life! Ignore what others say about you, if they are talking about you THAT much obviously you must be very important!

Very hearfelt write...very sad...
well expressed... your emotions.. your feelings.. everyhing could be felt...

One suggestion- Try experimenting with some better words... that would add more impact to your poem...

one typo in this line
"to ave saved my life"

please check..

otherwise..its a well written poem...
nice read..

This is very nice, flowed wonderfully 5/5

This poem brought me to tears!! it was beautiful!

This poem brought me to tears!! it was beautiful!