I saw her again,
longing for my love,
vivid dreams,
of distant colors,
makes me want to sing.
=> I like this part..it flows..

sounds like a violin,
with my voice so sore,
maybe I'll get home,
your being I adore.
=> You use funny way to describe your voice... :D

so drink up your wine,
and play your violin,
oh darling you're so fine,
it's true that love turns blind.
=>I am laughing for the last 2 lines. You are so funny, aren't you..

This is a nice poem.. I like this.

WOW! This is really good too...it's really sweet, and sounds sincere...if only some guy would direct something like this to me *sigh*, I'd pretty much ask him to marry me on the spot :P Of course, I fail at string instruments, it'd have to say flute :P
Anyway, very good. You're good at getting into your characters. I look forward to more!

I love this

This is so good. LIke a voice of music.

sounds like a violin,
with my voice so sore,
maybe I'll get home,
your being I adore.

This stanza was wonderful! [5.5]

BEst wishes,

SArah A.

Hey love, congrats for being on the best love poems list :) :) :)