Wow! You honestly amazed me with your writing in this poem, it posses so much uniqueness and your choice of words is fantastic.
I enjoyed in each line, you created so effective rhythm with broken lines in which you wrote a poem.
Atmosphere is also remarkable and you expressed every emotion beautifully. I am truly impressed by dark creativity of this piece, and you said so much with it, bravo!

Wow deep but not too deep where my feet couldn't find the bottom. liked your words and feel they probably came from a poets heart. keep up the nice works

Good poem... good selection of words... Nice to read.