A twisted tale of fate
Of fire burning hate
A glimmer of pale skin
That is where the story begins
Razors with the urge to pierce
With a poisonous deadly kiss
Skin tarnished with colourful veins
Bulging to feel some pain
The dark figure who visits each night
Who takes his victim with a swoop of flight
Hears wimperings of family so dear
They fear too much terror to shed one tear
Ooohh.. 0.o, dark =P
I like the imagery though; the opening line is the best, 'twisted tale of fate' really just set the scene that anything dark can happen.