Although the way you wrote your poem is not correct but Its words are well chosen.This is your intelligence that in whole poem you tried to say 'he has gone' with different sentences..WOW ! You can say a single point in different sentences !
Lovely , just puntuate this poem , as the poems are!
5/5 n a vote from me !
Biya

Try to take out the �?�¢?? in the poem, it was wonderful. i love how you set it out and every word that you wrote. you have boundless amounts of talent. well done.

5/5 from me, David

=D !! i ReAllY LikE tHiS p0eM !! g00d w0rK !! = D!!