by Mello193 Apr 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
For Chelsea Shafto |
by mistake
I hope that happy ending is still to come and you’re enjoying life. Some bits didn’t flow to well, but overall I the mental picture came across enjoyably. Good read, thank you |
by BlueJay
I love the descriptions in this piece, and the flow was so smooth while the words were written and placed so preciously. Your voice is clear and the style is wonderful. I absolutely love this piece. |
by East Poetry
This poem had really good flow and I really liked it. |
by Sammerz
Im speechless i have no clue wat to say this poem is so amazing words cant describe it |