Im speechless i have no clue wat to say this poem is so amazing words cant describe it
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oh btw your poems lately are so amazing i love em keep up the good work

This poem had really good flow and I really liked it.
I'm left wondering how it has a happy ending though. From what I gather this was writing during a time in your life when someone walked out on you right? 5/5

I love the descriptions in this piece, and the flow was so smooth while the words were written and placed so preciously. Your voice is clear and the style is wonderful. I absolutely love this piece.

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I hope that happy ending is still to come and you’re enjoying life. Some bits didn’t flow to well, but overall I the mental picture came across enjoyably. Good read, thank you