Orange, yellow and even blue too

To be honest, I really didn't like the title, I know it was part of the poem, but it just didn't catch my eye.

"Red is the color that symbolizes love
Orange, yellow and even blue too
Yellow equals the happiness within"

Very true, this is how I see the colors too, well written so far.

"Green like the grass showing love to all
Blue as the sky showing freedom for all
Indigo lights illuminating the beautiful sky
Violet flowers lay the ground, where love is all around"

First line: This made me smile, the grass showing love, how sweet.

Second line: You already wrote "showing" and the repeat in such a small poem threw me off.

Third line: I did like "indigo lights", that was something I haven't heard used before.

Fourth line: "lay the ground" really didn't read the best, because of the wording.

And for the third time you repeated "all", which didn't hold my interest.

Overall, 4/5 from me, a little work could be done on this piece but it was unique, the idea of writing about the seven colors of the rainbow and what they symbolize.

Take care and God bless you.

~MaryAnne

Good job.

I liked it. The flow was great as always and i liked the word choice. I liked how you used the colors of the rainbow to symboliz love beauty and freedom. 5/5

Nicely done

Nice poem. I like how you used the colours of the rainbow.. But correct me if i'm wrong.. I thought yellow symbolised friendship? not happiness? I could be wrong.. It's just that I'm a florsit, and I know yellow roses symbolise friendship.. =]

But anywho.. It was nicely done.