by PygmyPuff
Aww, its so cute and fun. The only thing i dont like (way to destroy your title) is that orange doesnt have its own characteristics. Like each color describes an emotion behind it and orange is just the beginning of a list. |
by Natalie
Nice poem. I like how you used the colours of the rainbow.. But correct me if i'm wrong.. I thought yellow symbolised friendship? not happiness? I could be wrong.. It's just that I'm a florsit, and I know yellow roses symbolise friendship.. =] |
by Cyma Khan
Nicely done |
by Brittany C
I liked it. The flow was great as always and i liked the word choice. I liked how you used the colors of the rainbow to symboliz love beauty and freedom. 5/5 |
by Jyoti Rawat
Good job. |
To be honest, I really didn't like the title, I know it was part of the poem, but it just didn't catch my eye. |