Broken heart

by Candy Rain   Apr 1, 2008


Last night i told you i love you and you just sat there and stared at me
I waited like forever to hear you say it back
But all i heard was dead silence
I felt like it was the end of the road and you've moved on
My heart broke into two just like that
All the months of fighting and arguing and now you finally give up
You were the first i cried to
You were the first i really cared for
You were the first I wanted to be with forever
Are you hearing me baby
I'm hurting because of you
I'm hurting very bad because i lost you
Now i know how linkin park feel when they say NOBODY'S LISTENING
But the thing is i just want you to be listening

(please tell me what you think)

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  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Awww sad poem..i know how that feels.... but yeah. change all of your "was" to were. it would definitely flow better. beautiful poem though. i like it

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